I’m mostly half-serious.

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Cake day: August 15th, 2023

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  • I’d also like to add that the prose is difficult to take seriously. For example:

    Her skin is the colour of honey left too long in the sun – warm, glowing, possessing that singular, unmistakable gold that the Indian subcontinent bakes into its daughters.

    I don’t know the writing norms this author is steeped in, but if they want the audience to take the topic seriously this is counterproductive.